Camp Story

I didn't like camp because I was sick and missed  my brother. He had a broken 

finger, it was really bad but he's ok now. Some of the things I enjoyed were  abseiling kayaking    swimming  and more. 

My Cool Simile

     

     In writing we have been writing similes in our    recounts to make them more interesting.

   Here is one of mine:

 The sea shone like diamonds.